Masked
I see through that veil of yours,
running down is a drop of tear!
Back then were my hands tied
My answer to you was just a void.
I see you again through that veil
You seem to look more than pale.
Now I offer you any help
You reject outright, hiding your self!
I know what I saw
There wasn't any flaw.
Yet I respect your dignity;
Your right to privacy.
I see you now, with that mask
' Was anything ever wrong ', I ask
Now, I smile along with you
for, I've masked myself too!
10 Comments:
DD, I think very soon you would forget how to write (prose)..you will start talking in poems :-)
And then I would start singing instead of talking normal and would it be the end of world or return of old civilization? ;)
Koduma da!..nee paatu classukku ponnaalum ponna...unnoda indha "apparam naan paaduvaen" poochandi tholla thaanga mudiyala...me not coming to Bangalore anytime now!!..I am terrified!!..U wud b worse than my guitar I guess:P
Hahahaha... Hey Krish, nalla idea. Get your guitar here. We'll rock Blr together ;)
Atleast my landlord wont ask rent for next few months hearing you play your guitar... wat say? :p
:) lovely
hey, DD, nice one! :)
once again.. amazing poem and liked the picture a lot..
you must have got a PHD in Surfing by now....You post amazing pictures...
nice poem..How did you get such a creative idea to express privacy through mask....
beautifully worded! thats really mystical.
Biju, Anu... you guys just encourage me a lot! Thanks a ton :)
Skely, I'm honoured to have written something that you could find so amazing! :P
Prof! You're ALIVE!!! :O
I got that creative idea from the very creation of the mask which is intended to create privacy and that concludes that there is nothing creative about it! Oh, I'm self impressed!!
Amrita, Nice to see you around. "mystical"... I loved that, thanks!! :)
Expect me peeping into your blog soon.
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