Thursday, August 31, 2006

Moments interred alive...











Darkness everywhere; the doors, closed
Life, the closest it could get to hell.
The most loved one -
the reason for your being -
the best friend -
the most trusted of souls...
To see her strangled in torture -
voicing constant murmurs of pain
pleading for mercy from the torturer unknown!

Every second passing with great strain
to hear the tired voice dying down, not the pain
to see her body twisting and turning in agony
Apparent that the body is burden to the soul...
Not a moment of peace, not a minute of rest
every bit of your consciousness praying for that silence
every drop of your tear begging for her sleep...
a break in that torture -
a few minutes of insensitivity!

A deal of new kind... a share in her pain
if at all that is possible... is it possible, you know not!
All you know is you are nothing but a stone,
your hands powerless to fence her from the torment
you can't hug and hide her from the curse!
And you surrender to the superior -
tears melting you down...
meditating the bargain -
the exchange of peace for pain.

And there in front of you, she sleeps...like a baby
and you know your prayers have been heard...
your deal just been made!

8 Comments:

At 10:28 PM, August 31, 2006, Blogger Anu said...

Why such a troubled post DD? Sad but beautiful!

 
At 9:23 PM, September 02, 2006, Blogger Movie Mazaa said...

Whatever happened??

 
At 4:59 PM, September 05, 2006, Blogger ck said...

I didn't get it. What is wrong? who is the sufferer?

 
At 10:51 PM, September 05, 2006, Blogger DD said...

haaai Annu!! thanx... :) A sad post just for a change!

Hey Velu, nothing happened... dont think too much! :)

CK! caught you here, finally... :D

 
At 9:10 AM, September 06, 2006, Anonymous Anonymous said...

One of your best posts dd!
It is said that our sweetest songs are those that tell our saddest thoughts!
I can feel the emotions that every word conveys.

 
At 11:00 AM, September 06, 2006, Blogger DD said...

Rightly said! what more do I say? :)

Rupushhh... you are jobless these days? :p mail fwds... blog comments... whats up?? ;)

 
At 11:46 AM, September 06, 2006, Blogger Skely said...

Rupppoooooosh,
What did you understand? I didn't understand anything!!!!
-- Skely

 
At 9:28 PM, September 06, 2006, Blogger DD said...

hmm... this post is not for dummies! You wont understand... :p

 

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